Thank you, Oleg! How neat that you glean a retrofuturistic feel in the story. That makes me happy! I’m also glad to see you want to see what happens next. I’m planning to release more soon.
I've read and re-read this, and enjoyed it beat for beat, as the mystery promised is presented. I can almost see the camera pull back and magically transit through parts of it, to an exterior shot of the hinted at vessel, in deep space, and then title credits, overlaid over the scene, glow into the frame... "Aubade". (But that's just one scenario, who knows what the character, Sara, has awakened in the middle of? The wonderful introduction could lead to all kinds of stories, most exciting.)
Thanks a million for this kind and visionary comment! That would indeed be something, to see this story on the screen. More to come soon about Sara and what she’s woken up to!
There is a nice retrofuturistic feel to it . Would be great to know where the story takes the reader next.
Thank you, Oleg! How neat that you glean a retrofuturistic feel in the story. That makes me happy! I’m also glad to see you want to see what happens next. I’m planning to release more soon.
Loved it! Would definitely like to see more!
Thank you, Frank! So glad to hear!
I've read and re-read this, and enjoyed it beat for beat, as the mystery promised is presented. I can almost see the camera pull back and magically transit through parts of it, to an exterior shot of the hinted at vessel, in deep space, and then title credits, overlaid over the scene, glow into the frame... "Aubade". (But that's just one scenario, who knows what the character, Sara, has awakened in the middle of? The wonderful introduction could lead to all kinds of stories, most exciting.)
Thanks a million for this kind and visionary comment! That would indeed be something, to see this story on the screen. More to come soon about Sara and what she’s woken up to!