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Excellent Chapter 2!! A poignant close, "So she did not tell them the last thing she remembered. And yet she did not lie to them. She did not tell them the last thing she remembered was the smell of her sleeping daughter's hair."

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I've read the first two, and started the third. Don't quit. No reason to quit. Ride it out. We'll all be glad you did.

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Super engaging and smooth! Looking forward to the next chapter

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👏👏 Great setup! Looking forward to the next. There's dread in the air...

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Loving it. Definitely keep going. What a terrifying situation

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